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PostSubject: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:29 am

Well i decided to make a sample of my story before i start... :3 enjoy

Crimrose Street No. 13
Author: Natsu


Chatper 1: The Red Beginning
The same thing happened halloween every year and it got boring waiting for trick or treaters it wasn't fun anymore waiting to scare them and see them run in tears, untill something strange happened i was looking out of my bedroom window wishing i was a kid again and then i saw it.
At no. 13 on my street a boy dissapeared but the odd thing when i was looking out of my window the boy was walking strangely with blood stains over his cloths, and a nasty bite mark on his neck i recognized him as soon as i saw his face it was paced over the news all year.
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PostSubject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:09 am

lol, spelling/grammar aside, its a good start Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:10 am

well it is only a sample XD
maybe you can help me work on it
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PostSubject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:11 am

Being a sample has nothing to do with spelling or grammar. Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Sat Aug 28, 2010 3:10 am

i know i know i ment help my grammar xd
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PostSubject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:33 am

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PostSubject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:05 am

Chibi i is now gonna train u in writing aswell as dueling... i gotz mah work published, i mean there are 2 trophies beside mah naow Very Happy

But i is training u naow Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ]   Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:29 pm

when i get another pc D:
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