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Natsu
Knight
Posts : 15 Join date : 2010-08-24 Age : 27
| Subject: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Sat Aug 28, 2010 12:29 am | |
| Well i decided to make a sample of my story before i start... :3 enjoy Crimrose Street No. 13 Author: Natsu
Chatper 1: The Red Beginning The same thing happened halloween every year and it got boring waiting for trick or treaters it wasn't fun anymore waiting to scare them and see them run in tears, untill something strange happened i was looking out of my bedroom window wishing i was a kid again and then i saw it. At no. 13 on my street a boy dissapeared but the odd thing when i was looking out of my window the boy was walking strangely with blood stains over his cloths, and a nasty bite mark on his neck i recognized him as soon as i saw his face it was paced over the news all year. |
| | | ArcanaForce0
Destroyer of Worlds and Spam
Posts : 197 Join date : 2009-09-17 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:09 am | |
| lol, spelling/grammar aside, its a good start |
| | | Natsu
Knight
Posts : 15 Join date : 2010-08-24 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:10 am | |
| well it is only a sample XD maybe you can help me work on it |
| | | ArcanaForce0
Destroyer of Worlds and Spam
Posts : 197 Join date : 2009-09-17 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Sat Aug 28, 2010 2:11 am | |
| Being a sample has nothing to do with spelling or grammar. |
| | | Natsu
Knight
Posts : 15 Join date : 2010-08-24 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Sat Aug 28, 2010 3:10 am | |
| i know i know i ment help my grammar xd |
| | | ArcanaForce0
Destroyer of Worlds and Spam
Posts : 197 Join date : 2009-09-17 Age : 34
| Subject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Sat Aug 28, 2010 11:33 am | |
| - Spoiler:
Chatper 1: The Red Beginning The same thing happened Halloween every year as it got boring waiting for trick or treaters to come by. It wasn't fun anymore waiting to scare them and see them run in tears. I waited, looking out the window until something strange happened. I was looking out of my bedroom window wishing I was a kid again, and then i saw it. At No. 13 on my street a boy disappeared, but the odd thing when i was looking out of my window the boy was walking strangely with blood stains over his clothes and a nasty bite mark on his neck. I recognized him as soon as i saw his face, for it was posted all over the news.
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| | | SpiTFire96
Guardian
Posts : 35 Join date : 2010-08-19 Age : 27 Location : Under a bridge on youtube, trolling
| Subject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Sun Aug 29, 2010 8:05 am | |
| Chibi i is now gonna train u in writing aswell as dueling... i gotz mah work published, i mean there are 2 trophies beside mah naow But i is training u naow |
| | | Natsu
Knight
Posts : 15 Join date : 2010-08-24 Age : 27
| Subject: Re: Crimrose Street No. 13 [ Sample ] Mon Aug 30, 2010 10:29 pm | |
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